Dare we take a peek? I shudder;
I shudder, should we dare seek to see;
Beneath our pantomime parades;
What turbulence lies under the facades;
Can the glare of the twisted mess found beneath;
Can the parts all broken, cracked, jumbled, mangled and messed up beyond measure;
Ever fit, not to cause so much displeasure?
Facades that shimmers and glimmers like timeless diamonds;
Yet within their confined cupboards they fight and grapple with their demons;
Painful warts underneath, score my soul like those of a soiled dove;
dirty, filthy, unbecoming, unwholesome tiny cracks everywhere;
The freckles of imperfection marks me brutally;
I am covered in sinful spots and dots;
A sore sight to the sinless eyes;
But who are these sinless eyes? Where are they be to be found? I ask;
Shall we dare to take a peek to see;
There are no sinless between you and I;
All broken bits of imperfections we are;
But yet he says;
Come! I beseech you;
Come to me with all your freckles and all your warts!
Come to me with all your spots and all your dots!
Disgraced, Broken, Discarded, Cracked, Twisted, Warped,Mangled,
Hopeless, Desperate, Ashamed, Naked;
However spotty it might be!
Come!
For my perfection makes your imperfection whole!
Come!
For I came to set the captives free!
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha

Oh my. What a powerful poem from you, Jacq! This is really… moving!
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Thanks dear one. I have been so upset with this system this morning.
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Aww. Operating system really is important to us writers. I hope things will get better. I really have no idea about that. Sorry.
But I think you can search similar incidents on the Internet?
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It is very important for us and a day that a system acts up can simply set off a chain of little annoying things if one is not careful.I simply shut down and left it alone for a couple of hours 🙂
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Now it’s working? 🙂
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Thanks for asking my dear. Still some issues but a bit better this morning. I truly prefer the old version!
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Aww. Atleast it has improved. I think there is no way to ‘downgrade’ the OS right?
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I don’t think there is a way because I am considering that idea.
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Yes. I think you should. 🙂
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Masterpiece. Paints the picture of fallen humans with all our sins;and a sinless Lord inviting us to come him and be saved. You have written this very well.
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Thank you Sir Romanus 🙂 I appreciate those lovely words 🙂
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Very honestly, I find that poem to be very great. I ‘ll have to find time to see more of the past things you have written. I’ll let you have my appreciation. Meanwhile I encourage you to keep on shining. Have a great day.
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Beautiful. You have such an anointing. I’m so glad I found you!
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Thank you so much for your gracious comments Kelly. I sincerely appreciate them 🙂
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Beautiful!! 😀
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Graciously said 🙂 thank you my dear.
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🙂
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Amazing so full of power!
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Mama Lynz, thank you very much 🙂
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so nice dear!
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🙂
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Beautiful ❤
You are a great poet, period =)
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I appreciate that. Thank you 🙂
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Your poetry gives a view of a philosopher, I’d love to know
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Thank you Ranu. I sometimes wish it was possible to morph into my physical presence when I am connecting with my blogging neighbours. I try to imagine who I am talking to as well 🙂
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Your poem is filled with truth and hope. It was a pleasure to read this morning.
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Thank you so much. It gives me hope when I hear such lovely comments 🙂
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I sincerely hope you are working on a book.
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I need to hear things like this my lady Violet to get me on the right track. I thank you for the awesome compliment 🙂
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Beautiful! I enjoyed it 😊
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Hello Christina, thank you for visiting and for your lovely statement. I appreciate it 🙂
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My pleasure =)
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🙂
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You write with an honesty and insight most of us would not admit to! Just excellent.
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Maybe, if we spent some more time being positively introspective some good will arise out of purging ourselves 😉
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Marvelous piece/peace Jacqueline….the poem itself and it’s author.
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Thanks my lady Tasha 🙂 I bask in your appreciation.
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A matchless invitation from the sinless One.
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None like him !
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What a powerful poem!
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your comments 🙂
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