Dear Madam Winter,
An appeal to your Bitter, Blustery Highness,
As your Icicled fingers of Frigid coldness,
Begins to drift in and it gets drafty,
Could we appeal to your Foggy, Frostbitten senses?
Could your Frozen Flurries and Freezing Rain be few?
We spend tons on Flus, Flannels and the Fireplace too!
Heating our Hearths to halt Hypothermia!
Expensive jackets, gloves, leggings, woolly mittens, caps, scarves and socks,
Long-Johns, Overcoats, Parkas and the entire shindig, cost a huge packet too!
White Christmas, Snowman and Ice skating is nice we know,
But Ma’am, we could do without your,
Foggy Overcast which forebodes Ice-storms and Hails!
We could survive without your Slippery Black Ice too!
We Turn Blue from the Huge Heaps of Knee-deep Snow on our doorsteps,
Where we are forced to Seek Cozy Comfort, to Bundle, to Hibernate and indulge in,
Copious cups of hot chocolate and Warm Soup,
Until your Dreary Frozen Highness,
Thaws from the Fingers of the Warming Sun!
Please, Your Frostbitten Excellency,
Do not get gusty and nip at my Chimney in annoyance,
I simply utter a shivery request!
Thank you, Your Chilliness.
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
In fulfillment of Writing 201 Poetry Day 9: Cold, Concrete Poetry, Epistrophe/Anaphora
Image courtesy: Pinterest
I’ve been reading these nice “cold” poems with a question in mind. How did she do that! Same for you. How do you think up these things? And, when you think them up, how do you do it? Those questions are not really for you to answer, but they are to let you know I certainly admire your creativity and ability. Nice work.
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Dear Oneta, you warm my mind with your words. I truly don’t have any precise answer and I do appreciate your compliments, your encouragement and blessings. You are one lovely soul. Bless you and have a beautiful day 🙂
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Another great and brilliant piece my sister! Enjoyed reading it…interestingly it made me to fall in love with winter…Lol.
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Thanks my dear sister. It does get too cold at times but what can one do. It’s a love and hate feeling with me 😉
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That was tooo good. I’m shivering. Love the snow falling effect, like a glass snowball. 😊
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Thank you Janice. I do appreciate your visit and lovely comments. We have no choice but to bundle up during the cold season 😉 Do have a lovely day my dear.
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For now you have escaped the cold in Dubai ? I’d say that’s lucky but I am better at withstanding the cold in Canada than extreme heat. Anyway, you have a good day too!
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Thank you Janice. Take care 🙂
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Yes, I’m shivering, too! Well-done, Jacqueline! I loved these lines:
“Please, Your Frostbitten Excellency,
Do not get gusty and nip at my Chimney in annoyance,
I simply utter a shivery request!
Thank you, Your Chilliness.”
So full of gentle humor and sweetness!
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I try to love Winter but it is infernally cold 🙂 However, we have to learn to live with it. Thank you so much for visiting today. I do appreciate your time and your comments. Kind regards 🙂
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My pleasure!
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🙂
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Oh God! You can even write about winter. Were you born with a quill in your hand?
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Mmmm! Let me go and ask my Mama 🙂
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I have a feeling that she got the quill framed. Have you seen any on the walls of your childhood home?
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I think I might have caught sight of such an ostentatious object 🙂
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Oh…perhaps she threw it away and handed you a calculator instead. What mother wants her daughter to become a writer?
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Surprisingly, mine doesn’t mind 🙂 Well, after all the cycles of being many other things, she has come to realize that this is my life (writing)
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That’s known as making peace with fate. She wouldn’t have wanted you to keep bad company (of the quill,) when you were born.
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Roflol, I love this response.
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That’s Anand my nerdy Indian family-friend.
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Anand surely had me crackling up this morning. Thank you Anand for making the heart smile whilst complimenting Jacqueline.
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🙂 you see Anand, I have very nice and polite friend 😉
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Thank you. Indian spices have unexpected side-effects.
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You are full of enlightenment 🙂
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No…that’s the other Anand. I am full of snarky malarkey.
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and that too 🙂
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hehe, you a funny one ain’t you.
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Honestly he is hilarious 🙂
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I like to think I am – but when I change into Anandhotep, I just look terrifying.
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Oh my goodness, stop. (like a caricature?hehe)
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Like the guy who’s working on the next issue of the QSM magazine, in my newest post.
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Well done on the QSM magazine. Will have a read this weekend 🙂
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Mom and Wifey make inroads into your weekend…beware!
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hmmm
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🙂
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I loved it..!! 🙂
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Thanks babes 🙂
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your welcome 🙂
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🙂
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Another brilliant entry. frosty, gusty nippy chillness .You sure have a way with words. :)<3ly.
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Thanks my very own sister 🙂 I haven’t seen you entry yet.
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Lovely expression – Madam Winter :-)), Personally, I am not fond of winters so enjoyed reading your beautiful poem
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Not my favorite season! Thanks for visiting and your comments. I appreciate 🙂
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It is a scene from a fairytale or animation and Your Royal Chilliness is king. There is a case of the extra cold and you are writing to him to ask leniency. You were advised to sell to him to him, how cold it is, so he could think and do think Your Royal Highness would think because heck you appealed to my senses…Sorry I got carried away.
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Ha!ha 🙂 I was enjoying this visual that you were displaying 🙂
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Whew, thank goodness. I tend to get carried away and I always worry about offender a writer.
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Nah! Not a problem with me 🙂
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Ah ,the winter’s blue, your poem displays all that winter throws upon us. Hoping we’ll have a better one this time! 🙂
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Hopefully 🙂
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Brings back memories of my first REAL winter last year here in Scotland. Does is get wintery where you are, or is it always warm there?
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I haven’t lived through winter in Dubai yet (moved here in July), so I’ll just wait and see. I liked Houston during winters, was so different from living in Maryland!
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Yes, Houston is nice during the Winter, but brutally hot during the summer. Have only visited Maryland in Summer, but heard the Winters were pretty nice.
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I don’t like cold at all so Maryland, though pretty could get into the negatives too. Houston summers tends to get pretty blistering, but it’s not as bad as Dubai!
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Oh that is deliciously good. Especially since I am no longer being held hostage by an upcoming exorbitant winter fuel bill!
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Exquisite ❤
Your gif reminds me of Christmas
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Those gifs were so enticing to my son. He he he! So christmassy and charming! And wow just wow the words pouring out of your mind. You might just make me love winter even though I really don’t like it when it gets so cold.
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Children love those things. Nyonglema, winter does have some teensy, weensy upsides, but I can live without it 😉 I don’t like cold!
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Wonderful requests. For I myself feel the same about Madam Winter. Lovely post!
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I really do appreciate your fervent compliments 🙂 I simply don’t like cold!
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I’m not built for that kind of weather!!
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There I was thinking that you are a sturdy brave 😉 A bitter cold can bring a strong man to tears!
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Yes. I can weather the cold BUT I prefer the warmth. It revitalizes me. The cold, while beautiful, still bites with every word! 😉
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Indeed it does bite 🙂
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People from the Philippines long for snow. Little do they know that it can be miserably cold. I liked how descriptive your piece is. 🙂
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Ryan, the cold can be very bitter. They miss nothing and can always take a very short trip to experience the cold. A weeks dose will cure them of any romantic inclinations. Thank you my dear for taking the time to visit.
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Ahh sis no Madam winter for you this year, marvellous!
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With a heart full of joy 🙂 I don’t get on with cold!
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Magnificent….my life’s motto is [strangely enough] “Get it Over With”….so I’m ready to get this cold, bitter winter over with!!!
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Stoic and strong lady. Right attitude 🙂
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