“The phoenix must burn to emerge.” Janet Fitch
Masters body sat in the big black armchair frozen in time, but his thoughts were still razor sharp. He sat in his comatose state, waiting for the rebirth from his ancient self into a fledgling of a boy.
The pains that he had cruelly inflicted on others ripped through his veins with piercing intensity, that each drop of rebirth serum snarled at him, yelling in anger as it slowly trickled through veins that were on fire.
He was combusting from the heat that engulfed his being, but the voice of ‘She’ ignored his mindful pleas to be set free unchanged.
Her ethereal blue eyes held him calmly in place even as her thoughts loudly reverberated in his mind.
“You must be patient she said. For you can’t achieve that which you seek until you shed your ancient skin of cynicism and look with eyes reborn through the depths of your soul.”
The story above is in response to this week’s WQWWC’s prompt ‘rebirth.’ A word that I find interesting and personally inspiring.
It’s a word that tells me different things. It tells me that I have to let go of some old vision and allow my inner eye’s to be renewed with new sight.
It tells me that sometimes out of my own ashes, I can rise to find myself over and over again as long as I believe, for as long as I am breathing.
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
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6 thoughts on “To become a fledgling…Writers quote Wednesday writing challenge.”
Yes. I agree with you about Rebirth being a great word and opportunity to start over. Yes. In order for this to happen sometimes death needs to come but the long term opportunity is worth it . beautifully written 🙂
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Thanks my lady Daisy 🙂
This is awesome
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Thank you Amunala.
Very inspiring post, Jacqueline! Your story was very vivid and had great imagery.