Flavours come in coloured tints,
Likewise emotions leave imprints,
They leave taste of euphoric dopamine,
Especially then, when you were mine,
They leave a taste of not so bright,
When everything is just not right,
A dash of joy, of peace, of faith, of hope and patience too!
A pinch of pain, of aches, of sorrow, of fear and trouble too!
With a tint of colour, each lives in our minds,
Always willing to leave something behind,
Of love that died or went away; it leaves a flavour mound,
A poignant taste of things all gone and never to be found!
You left our lives with quite a bang!
You left us behind with a lot of pangs!
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
Miss you dad! Happy birthday. Its 2 years on, since you left!
In fulfillment of Writing 201 Poetry – Day 8: Flavor, Elegy, Enumeratio

Hi Jacqueline, lovely poem. It is a strange thing the flavour of life, once it’s gone we can’t get it back but what we always have though is memories, a lot of good memories. Very lovely poem for your dad.
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True talk. Once its gone, it’s just the memories that we are left to cling to. Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate them 🙂
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Hi, Jacqueline, it is sad but up in heavens your Dad must be saying,”I’m so happy my daughter remembers me.” 🙂
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I do hope so. It is actually difficult to ever forget one who was so good to you. Something will always take your mind there for some reason. I think my brain has been wired to remember birthdays of those close to me. Thank you so much Ranu. I appreciate your kind words. Regards 🙂
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Very sweet. Brought back memories of my own dad who passed away many years ago. Never forgotten though.
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No! They are never forgotten. Thank you for visiting and for your kind comments. 🙂
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Beautiful poem and wonderful tribute to your father ☺
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Beautiful poem describing the impact your Father’s loss has had on you.
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How beautiful is the memory of the Just. Wonderful Poetry for the departed. Though they may not be with us,their memories linger in our hearts.
Welldone. 🙂
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I’m in awe of your poems….all of the one better than the other! I’m sure your dad is mighty proud of a daughter like you 🙂
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you bring tears. beautiful tears.
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It’s his birthday and I can’t help but remember. Thanks a lot my lady Violet.
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We never forgot those who have changed their Plain of Existence. Touching poem full of colourful flavours! Good job!
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Thank you my dear Nyonglema. No we never do! We just learn to carry on.
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Ahh this is a lovely poem for him!
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Thanks sis. I sometimes wonder….
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Lovely Elegy.
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I appreciate the comment. Thank you Marion. Kind regards
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🙂
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But they never really leave us because they poured themselves into us and are part of us.:0) Peach is my favorite color and flavor a perfect color for joy! Loved the poem.:0)
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Peach is such a sweet and calm colour. Yes, indeed children are receptacles of the upbringing of their parents and when one is lucky to be blessed with a good parent, it is joy. That way they really never leave us. Thanks Ma’am.
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Beautiful poem…
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Thanks MLou. Much appreciated 🙂
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It’s been two years and sometimes it still feels like it was yesterday. I know, I lost my mom 9 years ago and it doesn’t seem that long at all. The wonderful thing about memories is that they will live forever in our hearts…until the day we get to see them again 😀
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You understand perfectly. Sometimes, I lift my phone sub-consciously with the intention to call my dad when it hits me that I just can’t do that
Sometimes, I replay our conversations and it feels just like yesterday. I really doubt if one ever gets over the loss of a parent even after ages. We just learn to live with the situation as best as we can in hope of seeing them one day again.
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Very sweet. It hits home with many of us. I had my dad only until I was 43; I’m 81 now so he has been gone almost half my life. It has been maybe five or six years since I had my last cry for him. Sometimes I see a man with a cowboy hat driving a Chevy truck and my first thought is still, “daddy.”
He’s the Pete in my “Pete and Amy stories.” I sorrow for those who do/did not have good fathers. God didn’t plan it that way!
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Oh! I read somewhere that the love of a good parent is forever missed no matter how long they’ve been gone and you just confirmed that. It definitely wasn’t God’s plan for us, but right from the days of Adam, disobedience and trying to play God seems to be a path too often beaten by humans. Your words are always so thoughtful Oneta and always makes me want to reach out and give you a *hug*. Thank you
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I got your hug and thank you.
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🙂
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Beautiful. Just brilliant. I will say that’s a wonderful tribute to your father. I’m sure he’s proud of you!
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I sincerely pray so Carlos. He was such a lovely soul. Thank you very much my friend 🙂
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