Fiction · Short Stories

The Strings Of Flame…

Eddy’s eyes strayed to the glittering guitar which hung behind the counter of the bar as he dusted.

Since he started working for Mrs. Hilley, he had wondered about it.

His eyes gleamed as he looked at it and the flaming guitar glowed brighter under his gaze.

He noticed that she touched it ever so often, dusted it with reverence and hung it back.

He had no idea what the story behind it was, but he couldn’t ask. There were rumours however, on one really knew the truth.

Since he was alone, he decided to play just a little bit. He hoped to own one some day soon.

Lost in the music the guitar’s flaming strings came alive and he failed to hear the door swing open.

Mrs. Hilley listened, tears ran down her face as he played haunting tunes.

Startled to find her watching him he hurried to hang it back but, she set two glasses of apple cider, sat him down to tell him the story of the flaming guitar.

© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha

Inklinz

In response to the FFAW photo prompt above from Pixabay.com and Priceless Joy for this enchanting story platform

 

27 thoughts on “The Strings Of Flame…

  1. I am not use to seeing the words “apple cider” without the “vinegar” so my mind was like “yuck….they’re drinking acv”. *Which is actually good for you btw, I tend to drink a teaspoon in my tea during the winter months but drinking it solo can prove to be fatal…metaphorically speaking.

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  2. Great write. Sounds like this guitar that she feels much reverence for, holds quite a story. You leave us on the edge of our seats. Well done!

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