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It started in just a second,
‘Cos that’s what he reckons.
He met her at a function,
Yes it was a luncheon.
In milliseconds their eyes clung,
He felt the air leave his lungs.
He knew that she was the one,
The sizzle she felt was no pun.
It’s been Forty years strong,
And they are still going on.
Writing 101 – Day 4 – Seconds
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I like that. Short but it says so much 🙂
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Thank you my lady 🙂
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Kilig-inducing seconds! 😀
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Yep. Love things 😉
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Well written😃
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Thank you very much Parul 🙂
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“The sizzle she felt was no pun.” Oh that is just delicious.
Enjoyed so much this poem. Thank you.
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Thank you JoHanna 🙂 We love to love.
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Love at first sight, lasting forty years and still going. Beautiful words on everlasting love, Jacq 🙂
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Annie, I know a couple like this and it always gladdens my heart to see them. A beautiful thing to watch. Thank you 🙂
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oh romance!!!
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Yep 😉
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A fine romance!
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I love romance 😉
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Awe – that describes my parents. They met in college at a dance. My dad said he saw my mom across the room and just knew. He told me that a second earlier or later and he would have never met the love of his life. They were together for almost 47 years, married for 43 years, when she died. Thanks for sharing, you brought back some fond memories of a love story.
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How romantic and lovely Kathy 🙂 They must have had very beautiful 47 years together. What a beautiful story. I am a romantic at heart.
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Against all odds, still married after 40 years…now that’s true love!
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Yes indeed. I actually had a couple in mind as I wrote it. They are such an adorable pair 🙂
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Oh I bet they are!!!
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Cute story!
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🙂 Thank you Jahnavi
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Certainty in moments!
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