Inspiration - Motivation · Love · Poetry/Poems

Your Love To Me….

Love birds

Y our tender gift of love to me makes my heart combust into heated waves;
O ver the years you unfurl and surprise me some more;
U ndaunted you give generously of yourself;
R egardless of how grumpy my own ways might be;

L et’s tie the knot my love, you said to me;
O ur love will endure till oceans dry out like deserts you assured;
V alidating your vows and promises to me;
E specially through the endless ebbs and tides of life;

T ender with tough tenacity, you have stood so strong;
Obinna!
M y one and only;
E nigmatic and excellent example of a gentlemanly husband!

© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha

In fulfillment of Writing 201 poetry – Day 2: Gift. Acrostic. Simile.

Image courtesy: Pinterest

58 thoughts on “Your Love To Me….

  1. Beautiful! We don’t write for our men enough. Your words speak to me because they describe the love of my life. There for me when I had nothing to give…he’s always believed in me from day one. We’re so different yet our core values are one in the same. I need to share this 🙂 xo

    Liked by 2 people

      1. Lol I’m sure I drive my guy up the wall…we both are guilty of that no doubt but I would miss our quirks if they weren’t there. I wouldn’t know what to do lol

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Hello. I really enjoyed reading your acrostic poem. Your simile is apt and I loved the alliteration as well. Bonus points! You have a small typo in the line “validating your vows..” . The r is missing..
    Your love for your husband shines through in this poem.
    Regards, Margie.
    ps. I really like your blog layout and headings, especially the comments one.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Oh! I LOVE love. 😀

    Jacqueline, this is beautiful, it’s good to appreciate people who make us feel special.

    It’s great to let a good man know that you know that he’s a good man! 😀

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Aww, I hope he sees this. I bet this isn’t the first enduring poem you’ve written for the love of your life! I’m imagining Obinna with a shoe box full of poems from his Queen. 😀

    Liked by 1 person

  5. The Reading Cottage: The Platform For Books, Health, Music, Features, Tourism And Travel's avatar The Reading Cottage: The Platform For Books, Feature Articles, Book Reviews, Interview, Culture, Lifestyle , Entertainment says:

    Hmmmhi Jacqueline, please lend me some of your romantic words. Where do you pull them from? Very interesting indeed.

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a reply to mentalbreakinprogress Cancel reply