Excited voice of the children drew Salome’s attention and before she could say hey presto, they burst into the kitchen trailing mud and straw. They were running after the chickens again for fun. Raising her voice to scold them for bringing in dirt, little Jude interrupted her:
“Look what we found Gramma,” he was clutching a strange straw bag.
“Leave it there and let me finish what I’m doing,” thinking it was probably filled with mushrooms or a frog, she continued plucking the cockerel for chicken stew, but their eager faces made her pause to take a peek.
A dumbfounded Salome burst into tears and laughter when she emptied the contents of the bag.
They kids had knocked Bernard’s scarecrow over and in a bid to piece it together, they found the straw bag.
Her late husband Bernard had been a dear man and many times the funny looking scarecrow made her smile in recollection of how much he had been drawn to it as his Dementia got worse.
She had no idea he had hidden lots of coins and forgot where he kept it.
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
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Aaaaw so sad!
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I have never come across the word bagood. I gather it’s some sort of stash of money.
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I thought I changed it. It’s a slang for stash so you guessed right 🙂
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I like learning new words, so thanks for not changing it !
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Wow what a heart wrenching story!! You are incredibly gifted… I have probably told you this earlier but I do not shy away from saying so again – I envy your way with words! More power to you… Cheers!
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Thanks my lady. I appreciate your wonderful compliment 🙂
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What a cute story! Her late husband’s hidden coins finally came to light! Sweet story, Jacqueline! I enjoyed reading this.
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Thank you Joy.
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My pleasure, Jacqueline!
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This was cute and sad at the same time.
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Thanks dear. Dementia is a very mean ailment.
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It sure is. I read about it.
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Sweet serendipity.
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I love the normality and love woven into this tale.
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Absolutely delightful to read such a happy ending!
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Cute story. A nice surprise for Gramma at the end 🙂
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Love scarecrows. And Jacqueline’s stories. ❤
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Dementia is an awful thing, and something we all dread as we get older. But I love the way you weave Bernard’s illness into your story, Jacqueline. Although I’s sad, it also has a warmth about it as Gramma’s memories are rekindled and she finds the stash of coins. 🙂
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What a lovely find and a story 🙂
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Beautiful and warm story with a tinge of sadness.
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Yes it is. Thanks Khaya.
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Sad but sweet with a little mystery to it.
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Thanks Eugenia 🙂
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Great story with big surprise. Loved it
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Thanks Beth 🙂
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I wonder if she’s been searching for the coins? Such a creative take on this photograph…and realistic.
Ellespeth
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Thanks Ellespeth. She had no idea it was that much that he had managed to tuck away and as he got more ill and rambled she felt it was just his dementia talking.
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As usual, I so enjoy your variety of posts!
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