Friday Fiction in Five Sentences · Short Stories

Blood work…Friday fiction in five sentences.

Blood, Vial, Analysis, Laboratory, Test, Medical

Felicia’s grip on the phone was so tight that anyone could see the outlined streak of the veins on her hand.

She stuttered in disbelief as she slowly sat down. Her legs had gone all weak at the knees.

Maybe you should come to the hospital Mrs. Vienna and talk to Dr. Patul. Would you like me to book a date?” The nurses droning voice continued at the other end.

Her mind whirred in tumult. How could the results come back negative? She felt so sure that Pete’s bloodwork was a mere formality. He would be a perfect match and donor for his twin brother Paul.

Now the result says the brothers are not twins, as a matter of fact, technically they are not brothers. What went wrong? She just couldn’t make sense of it all. This is all confusing…

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13 thoughts on “Blood work…Friday fiction in five sentences.

  1. Congrats on the newly published book Jacqueline :). I got lost making my way to the last blog party thanks to this dandy tablet that I’ve been forced to use. Anyway I’m hoping to be at this one coming. -One Love

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  2. Aliens. The brother is a clone created by invaders from another galaxy. They secretly probed their mother at night impregnating her while she slept. These beings have the ability to copy everything about humans except their DNA. Life on their planet died and they entered Earths atmosphere searching for female hosts to continue their species.

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