In response to The Daily Post’s writing prompt: “Ode to a Playground.”

When the news of your demise filtered through,
That the bigwigs had finally purchased you,
To plant their mega buck superstores and install new, expensive play toys,
To charge and enrich greedy pockets so much more,
I was dismayed, I was disheartened, through and through,
How dare they do such a thing to you!
Such appalling steps taken to deface,
Attempts to erase decades of a joyful place!
Of laughter of children that echoes in the heart,
Of scrapes and bruises,
Of hides and seek,
Of swings and slides to your utmost delight.
The birds squawk in harsh protest,
No more crumbs from the little ones,
Even the trees weep in anguish from such assault,
The glee and joy of young scrambling ones,
Would they know no more!
Yet you live on in this grown child’s heart,
Always fond will your memories be,
My Polo Park, you were a treat to me,
Where friends were found,
Fostered and Flourished.
Maybe you have gone somewhere else to be,
Where you will gladden the hearts of other young ones.
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
That is a lovely tribute Jacqueline 🙂
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It is an overdue opportunity to say something about the grasping landlords
Thank you so much for the kind words Edwina. Enjoy your weekend 🙂
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You enjoys yours as well. 🙂
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🙂
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very nice!
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Thank you Mama 🙂
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🙂
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“Even the trees weep…” – I can hear the echo of children at play. Alas, no more. Thank you for your tribute, Jacqueline. Sniffle. Sniffle. 😢😢😢
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You make a good crying tree, my friend ;);)Thank you so much for reading. I appreciate you and your words 🙂
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RIP Polo Park
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They murdered my park *sniff, sniff*
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lol sorry I laughed at that 😀
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at my expense 😉
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Totally! 😀
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🙂
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So now where can the children play?
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In their parents back yards 😦
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Counting Crows nailed it with “paved paradise and put up a parking lot”. That’s a shame because all we need is another mega store. Beautiful tribute
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Thank you dear Lula. It really is sad when we destroy nature with such consistent zeal and yet moan about the consequences of our actions.
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Oh what a tribute!
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Thank you my dear. I appreciate your words. Have a blessed weekend 🙂
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You too Jacqueline! :*
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I like how you approach these prompts. I don’t think I would be trying them myself if it weren’t for you.
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That is about one of the coolest compliments that I have received 🙂 Thank you very much. I am glad to be a source of encouragement for you 🙂 Kind regards
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Very well written!! Feel sorry for the kids, where they will play?
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On the X-box and every thinkable gadget that will be manufactured 😦
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Well that just sad =( no more outdoors
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It really is!
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The big bully that is Capitalism, and the many hearts that it breaks. 🙂
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Part of the huge problem that we have in today’s World
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