Buds of Spring
Georgette looks out of the window
The cold is fast thawing out and little fresh sprigs are sprouting.
It should be warm soon
Yet the coldness in her heart did not match the liveliness of the budding Spring
Her heart feels like a ghost town.
Where is he?
He promised her everything and she believed in him…
Counting the days and hoping that it’s just a dream.
A COOKING POT AND TWISTED TALES
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She wallowed, has winter turned to spring.
Georgette thought about him all the time,
In her mind she went over, all the special times they shared together.
By her pillow she kept, the last shirt he had worn,
It still smelled like him, and made her want him more.
Would he keep his promise and return,
Or would spring arrive everywhere but in her heart. MANDIBELLE
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From the heart’s wreckage
springs hope, a bloom delivered
“Miss you” scrawled on note
not forgotten yet
not this Georgette, rose in hand
sweet perfume in nose
Wait until summer
search for him in heat shimmers
raising wavy hopes… MELINDA KUCSERA
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Georgette sat wistfully looking out her window.
The sun was shining. The birds were tweeting, prancing, dancing and courting.
Large, colourful butterflies performed a graceful aerial ballet whiles the bees supped nectar and collected pollen.
The soft breeze ruffled the lush new green leaves in the trees.
It looked so serene and peaceful. Everywhere but in her heart. It was barren.SOUL GIFTS
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Please can someone help bail Georgette out?
We can’t let her heart languish in a barren state 😉
Feel free to add your contribution and the collabo will continue if you do.
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car door slammed outside
the neighbor out for a drive?
a glance steals her breath
in top hat and tails
he’s come, red rose in his hand
his eyes search for her
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Beautiful lines. Who is he?
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I love the collab. Congrats everyone! We made a great poem! Thank you Jackie for hosting this.
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It’s turning out really lovely. Thanks Mel 🙂
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Now that is super cool.
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Thank you 🙂
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😄
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That was interesting …. does it finish here, or do we have a romantic wedding coming up ?!
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Let’s hope a wedding happens. I want some happiness for her 🙂
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That would be good 🙂
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Such a gorgeous and dazzling poem!
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Thanks my dear. You can join in if you wish 🙂
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This is turning out wonderful!
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It’s fun and turning out nicely. Thanks Joy 🙂
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Excellent writing by all contributors. I await an ending. Maybe she just gets up and goes to work like most of our stories end, but then we know she is still human, not a zombie forever. Somebody help her see the bees and be motivated to get a move on. Her man’s no good anyway to treat her like that.
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I totally agree with you Oneta. She should get a move on and stop twiddling her thumbs waiting on a guy who’s probably not worth her time of the day.
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car door slammed outside
the neighbor out for a drive?
a glance steals her breath
in top hat and tails
he’s come, red rose in his hand
his eyes search for her
Above by Melinda Kucsera and I am adding to:
Our eyes meet, my heart beating wildly
The wind has calmed and
the stillness is haunting
I can feel the blood rush through my veins
But, it’s not HIM
who is this man, in top hat and tails
and a red rose?
Why is he here, where is he from?
He approaches me with a smile
Is this meant to be?
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oh I love this addition amanpan! Where do we go from here? Is he here to pick her up to meet him? What you think? I could write the next lines if you want to continue it.
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By all means Mel. Please do 🙂
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Oh, please write the next lines. I love this idea.
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I did! Scroll down in the comments and you’ll see it. I left them at the church. The happily ever after is on you, if you want to write it. 🙂
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Let me know what you think.
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Oh what a beautiful ending! Thank you for continuing the tale when I couldn’t 🙂 Your ending is breath-taking. It’s the perfect happy ending for Georgette who has suffered such trials and tribulations! Thank you!
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Thank you. I believe we all wanted a happy ending for Georgette.
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You’re welcome 🙂 I know I did!
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Yes we did. I hoped so 😉
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I agree with you Mel. A fine closure 🙂
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Though we didn’t address who her sweetheart is and where he’s been 😉 Next communal poem perhaps?
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A lovely and intriguing addition my dear. I wonder who the new guy on the scene is 😉
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Yes, I thought a little more mystery would spice it up some.
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The children played around her
She found no joy in their banter as she usually did
Her heart was facing a tumultuous storm
How was she going to get out of this?
She had abandoned all for him
Yet his reward was to up and leave
“How does one move on after this?”
She thought to herself
Not even the children gave her the will to go on
And yet, move on, she had to
Mustering all the energy in her
She left the corner for the kitchen…..
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Good one Joan. The collabo is growing. Thank you 🙂
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here you go:
He put out his hand
a note folded in his fist
she read it and smiled
A diamond ring flashed
fell from paper’s folds to palm
slides on ring finger
A church flower decked
he stands tall at the alter
she in her white dress…
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Ah! At long last. A dazzling addition and start for Georgette 🙂
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I hope someone will write the wedding scene. I’ve always been the bridesmade never the bride, so I can’t take it any further. Thank you.
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What enticing endings! Now I take my choice. It is still for the new man. Too late for the other. It has been fun reading The Perils of Georgette.
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From Melinda:
He put out his hand
a note folded in his fist
she read it and smiled
A diamond ring flashed
fell from paper’s folds to palm
slides on ring finger
A church flower decked
he stands tall at the alter
she in her white dress…
I am adding to:
so angelic and serene
so undeniably beautiful
she literally floated down the aisle
as if on a cloud
her heart beating with joy
her once tear filled eyes were smiling
as they exchanged their vows and promises
she knew she had made the right choice
they gazed into each others eyes
cherishing their very special moment
a moment she will never forget
one she will never regret
she always knew he was one
her dreams come true
her life now complete
the past forever gone
the present forever here
the future forever near
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Oh what a beautiful ending! Thank you for continuing the tale when I couldn’t 🙂 Thank you Jackie for this wonderful opportunity to write with a community of writers and bring one lonely soul to joy.
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Jackie has such great ideas. 🌻
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yes she does! 🙂
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Thank you ladies 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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🙂 thanks dear
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Fabulous finish 🙂 I shall publish the whole story next week. Well done and thank you my dear one. Be blessed 🙂
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Thank you for your great idea.
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