Nervous, Anna’s heartbeats skipped faster, but with determination, she grabbed the duffle bag that contained her meagre belongings and made her way to the harbour.
Standing in the shadows she watched the tourists disembark. She knew the routine of the riverboats that frequented the quaint historic town of Oaks and Side and knew she had about two hours to sneak into a boat.
‘Keep calm Anna, don’t appear conspicuous, blend in with the passengers, this just has to work,’ she repeated under her breath. Over and over the chant emboldened her steps as she made her way to the biggest boat.
Thoughts of a failed plan are totally unpalatable for her. This time around Jude would probably kill her.
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
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That’s a good teaser! Is there more of Anna’s story? Can’t help but wonder, who is Jude….
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I know. A lot of lose ends to bring together. Hope to continue it. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Oh please don’t stop… What happened next? Nice one Nne.
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Ha,ha! I hope to continue it 🙂
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Oh Anna, I hope you made it.
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I believe she did pass through a rough time but came out a better person. Thank you Bernadette
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Wonderful story, Jacqueline! Anna is running away from an abusive relationship! Good for her and I hope she is successful!
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I believe she would be. A bit rough but it worked out eventually.
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Great story!
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So expertly written as always, Jackie. All the best to you. 🙂
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Thank you Kelly. Blessed be 🙂
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Please write some more!
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Ha,ha! I’ll build on it. Thank you 🙂
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Great post!
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The suspense though. …it is deafening!
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Thank you for reading.
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oh. wow. the tension is felt. i hope Anna will be able to escape.
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Oh, you have us sitting on the edge of our seats. I hope there is more to the story. Well done.
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This leaves you wanting more! Hope to see more. 😀
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Thank you Pavanneh. I hope to continue too 🙂
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