He always ran so fast that everyone marvelled at the fleetness of his feet.
They all thought he was a champion and admired him.
No one had an inkling that he was trying to outrun the demons that taunted him.
He ran, and ran until he could no longer hear their snarling voices.
Once his steps faltered, they came nipping at his heels; he just had to keep running…
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
a cooking pot and twisted tales 
I love this, Jackie! There is a lot of meaning behind those words.
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I believe so too. Thank you Lydia. Do have an excellent weekend.
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You as well!
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That was pretty powerful Jacqueline and I’m referring to more than the running.
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Thank you Miriam. I wonder why the story came to me and it’s more than running. Have a great weekend.
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Oh yes, there’s a lot of meaning there I know. Have a great weekend yourself. xo
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Wow that is dark. Great writing!
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Thank you Pamela. I like your comment. Do have a great weekend 🙂
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oh geez. this is subtly heart stopping, Jacq.
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Thank you Rosema. It came to me as I was sleeping. Have a great weekend 🙂
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Thank you, Jacq! 🙂
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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A powerful piece, Jacqueline. Maybe some day he’ll feel strong enough to turn and face his demons. No one can keep running forever.
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Hi Jacqueline, you always employ the element of surprise and leave me wanting to know more. I feel really sorry for him and I hope this is not some prophetic insight into the soul of Usain Bolt! (Lol)
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Ha,ha! Hmm! Who knows, but it’s not Usain Bolt. The story came to my mind for no reason that I can put my fingers on.
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Gripping!! Well done Jackie.
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Thank you Steph 🙂
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You’re welcome. 😃
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Wonderful story Jacqueline. I hope one day, these are demons he an beat instead of run from. Exercise can be hardwork but should be for joy, not for running away from what haunts you. Great metaphor here.
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True. In my mind I am willing him to turn around and face those demons. Thank you Mandi 🙂
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