As the feverish rigors shook her body, she mumbled to him; “If the baby dies, don’t wake me up!”
She was sedated to calm her down and stabilize her blood pressure.
Too many pregnancies she had lost and had much hope that this one would survive, yet it looked like a futile dream.
It was a battle against fate and time as the doctors raced to try and save the neo-natal.
He sat by her bedside, torn apart inside as tears silently dripped down his cheeks and he prayed like he had never prayed before.
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
Footnote: I had a double mind about writing this short story, but this is a piece of my story. A piece of my journey and I daresay many other women have walked down this torturous path and to those who are in the Lord’s waiting room for fruits of the womb, I say “Hold on.”
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Thank you.
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That is the terror every expectant prays against, the pain that many never survive. I am glad that you came through sane and well
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Thank you Joan
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Well done these five sentences say it all so eloquently. xxx
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Thank you
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powerful little story
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Thank you
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This is a very emotional read! I would like to read the novel version. When will that be ready? 🙂
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I honestly have no idea when. It’s not an easy story for me to write so I just take it a bit at a time. Thank you
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sorry to know that you had been through that hell!
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One of life’s hard experiences. Thank you
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Emotional little story!
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A sad tale. You want both the Mother and the child to survive. I don’t know where this story is set or if her religion or life situation affords her birth control, but I’d hope in many places when you’ve had many kids, a woman is able to most likely stop herself from getting pregnant again. It’s a good thing in the modern era for some people. Maybe, that could have afforded her a longer life. But like I said, this could be somewhere, she doesn’t have thos options. Emotional and heartbreaking piece.
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Thank you for sharing out of your own painful experience Jacqueline.
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A heart felt piece of writing, thanks for sharing your story.
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