Fingers
caress her tender scalp
luxurious tendrils of auburn hair
are put in a twisted knot
‘I love you forever’
I whisper into her ears
shivery bumps run down her spine
as she sighs in dreamy reply.
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© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
Whisper, The Daily Post Prompt
Image: pixabay
a cooking pot and twisted tales 
I love this.
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I love romance. Thank you Raili 🙂
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Neck nibbles are the best!
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You know the truth 😉
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🙂
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very romantic. and tender.
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We love tenderness, you and I 😉
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Reading it gave me the shivery spine bumps! Lovely!
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Thank you Vicky. Scalp massage can be sooo good and relaxing 🙂
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Beautiful! My initial reaction was the love between a mother and daughter
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I started out with a mother and a baby in mind, then it wandered further when I remember how good it feels when my husband gives me a scalp massage 😉
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That’s the beauty of poetry! It lends itself to so many interpretations ☺
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Wow! Fingers in my hair lets out the stress when I’m tired.
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Me too! When I persuade my dear Himself for a scalp massage it’s absolutely divine.
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and why shivery bumps was running through my spine while reading this? So beautiful Jackie, I felt it.
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Thanks dear. I love scalp rubs too 😉
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This is talent.
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Thank you my dear Pamela for saying so 🙂
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Hello Pamela, I am doubtful if I responded to this comment. Thank you very much. You’ve been on my mind especially with the wildfire incident in Alberta.
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Thanks Jacqueline. Yes it has been devastating out here for many people. But its nice to see so many Albertans and Canadians helping each other out. We are really coming together.
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beautiful poem! I want that experience!
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You will experience it my dear Mel 🙂
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🙂 I hope so
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