♥ Love Rations ♥
When you batter me with the whip lash of your looks
And the coldness of your words,
My heart and soul shrivels from the lack of warmth.
As the icicles that drips from your eyes
Pierce my veins and leaves them frozen.
Your deliberate silence and denial
A negligence to my needs.
Your withdrawal of your love at will
Causes a ponder of thoughts.
If love is a chip to bargain with,
And we play chess with our hearts,
To determine who wins this game of shooting the darts.
Should your love be doled out in rations,
Dependent on my emotional engagement,
Or your emotional intelligence of the moment?
Taunting me with fast promises,
That fails to feel full.
Always leaving me with the need for some more.
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
Please click on the link to listen in and leave your candid thoughts, advice, constructive criticisms. Thank you
You are absolutely stunning!
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Now, this is a huge compliment. Thank you Christine for these beautiful words. I appreciate them 🙂
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You have a beautiful voice, Jacqueline. 🙂 Is the background music an accompaniment? It seems to flow well with your rhythm. Nice! Perhaps, next time you could rotate your phone 90 degree, so that when we view, it’s full screen. But this is not a big issue. 🙂 (I guess you are using your phone to record, but correct me if I’m wrong) On the whole, it’s lovely! ❤ ❤ ❤
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This was totally done impromptu and the music is at the restaurant where we are. I went to a corner to do it because if I decided to leave it for another day, I just might not get to doing it at all. Now, this gives me a good idea about the music part. I think that I will keep it as part of the background. I honestly have no idea how to tweak these things but I guess I will keep practicing till I get it right. Thank you very much for your kind words. Have a lovely weekend.
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You’re most welcome, Jacqueline. 😄 Have a lovely weekend! Oh! I forgot to tell you… You are beautiful! ❤️❤️❤️ I think I’ve said that before, didn’t I? 😄
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Thank you my lady for your warm compliments. I truly appreciate them ((hugs)). Have a beautiful weekend too.
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((Hugs))
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Beautiful poem. Very good questions to wonder and need thoughtful answers to. You have a lovely speaking voice. Your voice is melodic and expressive in the right places. Great job on the YouTube video, that’s a feat to speak somewhere so many people will hear you speak. The line about icicles created a good picture for me as did the mixing of games, as if to say you were tired of playing games.
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Thank you Mandi for your very constructive comments. Yes indeed, it was to express the tiredness of a lady with the games that the gentleman she is dating is playing.
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Good for you!! I didn’t know we could do this! Were you scared? After I do my book, I may try this. You looked very professional and at ease. Congratulations!
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Thank you Elva. I guess we can ‘cos I just did it and I like it. Will continue doing so. I am happy you think it’s professional ‘cos I had butterflies, but you have to try first and I guess it gets easier. My regards 🙂
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I love it! Your voice is gorgeous and you are gorgeous and I love to hear you read poetry! This is a poem you said you just scribbled down? I like hearing it from you so I can hear it in the manner with which it’s written, if that makes sense! It’s also fun knowing what you actually sound like so I can now “hear” you in your writing!
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It makes a whole lot of sense. We were actually at a restaurant hence the music in the background which I like. The couple sitting not too far looked like they were in the midst of a misunderstanding and though they spoke in heated low voices, the lady looked miserable, which simply made start scribbling *I always carry a tiny note pad with me*. I am happy that you like it and you just paid me such wonderful compliment. I sincerely appreciate your support 🙂
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You are one lovely soul. Your showering of kind words will not go unrewarded. I do so love your supportive words. Blessings 🙂
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Wow! A milestone you just did, Jacq! Congratulations! 😀 I surely agree with Fun! 😀
You go girl! 😀
P.S.
Don’t expect tomatoes, we love you too much to do that! 😀
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Rosema my dear one, you are a beautiful trooper. Thank you very much for your supportive words. I appreciate you 🙂
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Oh you truly deserve it, Jacq! You are a beautiful soul! 😀
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Rosema, I appreciate your enthusiastic support ((hugs)
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Oh you deserve them, Jacq! 😀
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I love it!! You are so beautiful toooooooo!
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Oh my!! What a lovely compliment my dear. Thank you so much. I am wearing a huge smile as I type this. I appreciate your kind words 🙂
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I’m glad! ❤ You're welcome!
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What a generous compliment my dear one. Thank you 🙂
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Darling Mwa! You really look beautiful 😀 and an amazing beautiful teeth as the words flowed out, Congratulations,That was a test run,to show us that nothing is impossible, Just do it. And you just did. I believe the music was a great accompaniment,you might consider using background sound as you go on with it. Ride on Sis 😀
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Ahh my sis, your words make me smile 🙂 Thank you so much. It was a case of just jump in and get it going and take it from there and I am glad that I did. Much love 🙂
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Great! much love 😉 sis
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Fantastic idea! What a pleasure to hear your beautiful voice and see your beautiful face! I love when the writer narrates –it feels so much more authentic because they know exactly how to emphasize their own words to convey the meaning! Wonderful video for a lovely poem!
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You are so good to me Meg. I sincerely appreciate your support and kind words. They bolster my confidence a lot. Blessings 🙂
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My first thought: Wow, you are beautiful! I found your voice calming and relaxing (maybe the background music added to it?). But I would definitely like to hear more. Congratulations on your first video! Hope there will be more!
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You please me with your lovely words. Thank you very much. I appreciate them and yes will be doing more.
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How nice to see you. You are as lovely as your words ! ☺ If that is your idea of scribbling…wow. Keep going. You have a perfect voice to do a vlog, a very melodic quality. I’d lose the background noise (restaurant music), but I understand the spontaneity of the moment. Well done, Jacqueline. 💖
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Thank you so much Van. I appreciate your taking the time to listen in. I will keep going like you said. I am glad that I responded to the spontaneous desire to do it 🙂
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It’s lovely to see you and hear your gentle voice, great poem too x:-)x
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Thank you my lovely sis 🙂
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If love is a chip to bargain with? Oh,my. This was absolutely wonderful
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Thank you my kind friend 🙂
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So nice to meet you. You are very brave. Your voice is very soothing, as I expected it to be. Thank you for sharing a part of yourself with us.
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Aww! Thank you for saying this. I felt nervous, but decided to brave and I am happy that I did. I am sure forthcoming ones will be easier.
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Beautiful poem + beautiful voice + beautiful woman = a beautiful experience 🌷🌷🌷
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Beautiful words from a beautiful soul. Thank you Amanpan. I appreciate your comments.
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That was very brave of you to do that. I’m not sure I would ever dare. It’s a wonderful poem too. Good job! 🙂
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Thank you Bun. Never say never. You could surprise yourself one day 🙂
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Well, anything’s possible I guess… I wouldn’t hold my breath, though. 🙂
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Daring move to do the recording from your reply to fun simplicity. I am yet to watch the video. Beautiful poem too
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I did it right there and then so that I don’t lose the nerves.
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Good job!
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Bless you my sister 🙂
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Finally listened…so good to see you and listen to your voice live. Well done.
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Thank you dear Dupe 🙂
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This is absolutely wonderful Jacqueline!
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Thank you my dear friend. I was nervous initially, but I am glad that I did it.
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I understand. Doing new things are always frightening, but once they are done we find out they aren’t so frightening after all. You are a very beautiful person!
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Thank you my dear for your wonderful support ((hugs))
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((HUGS!!)) xoxox
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Wow! Dear Jacqueline, you are absolutely gorgeous like your writings. You’ve got such a beautiful voice and you are what I call – black, bold and beautiful. 🙂 This was a good job. Keep going! All the best to you in your dreams. Cheers! 🙂
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Thank you my dear one for your wonderful words. I truly appreciate your support and will keep going 🙂
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You’re welcome! I like that spirit of optimism. Looking forward to more goodies from your thinking corner. Remain blessed!
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You too my dear 🙂
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I won’t throw tomatoes, instead I hand you flowers. Everything about you is beautiful Jackie…from your voice, to your countenance, to your words. You are the full package, my dear. Welcome to your calling!!! *stands and applauds*
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You are just a darling my dear Tasha. Thank you so much for your kind words. You make my heart feel full 🙂
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Absolutely Stunning! Girl, that voice…I Love…I absolutely love accents. Have an awesome weekend my beautiful sis!!! xoxoxo :O)))!!
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Wow! Such wonderful compliments. I appreciate you a lot Emma ((hugs))
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Btw, you did a wonderful job with the poetry!
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Thank you so much sis 🙂
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If this is your first one, I should say Bravo! This is the first time I read the poetry and heard the video and both were good! A nice idea that. Hope you will write and record many more!
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Lovely and kind words. Thank you very much. Indeed, I intend to continue. I actually plan to have it as a feature on my blog. My regards 🙂
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That will be nice!
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Absolutely incredible, your voice is beautiful and so are the words that were created. Inspiring. Peace and love, K
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Many thanks for these beautiful words of yours. I sincerely appreciate your support my dear. Regards 🙂
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Well done for your first poem vlog. I also like the construction of the poem: yoir word choice for example “whiplash of your words.”
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Ahh! You listened. Thank you very much my dear one 🙂
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You are welcome. Do more :).
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I sure will, hopefully 🙂
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That was beautifully done, love your voice! It is amazing the depth added to a piece of poem when listening to the work by the writer.
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Thanks dear Folake. That’s what people seem to think. That the writer reading it is much more interesting.
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What a great poem, and to have taken a conversation overheard, and wrote it with such meaning. Loved hearing you read it. You would never have guessed you were nervous! Wonderful!
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Thanks my lady 🙂 I am glad you like it.
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Quite…Ok, wait.
First of all, you are incredibly beautiful my dearest Jacqueline! But they say that outward appearances are a reflection of the soul sometimes 🙂
Second, that was wonderfully written and spoken! It was a pleasure to actually hear your voice! The only thing: I wish the music wasn’t so loud so I could hear every word as clear as day. But you can only control so much.
Thanks for sharing! Take care!
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My, my. What lovely and kind compliments Carlos. I am grinning from ear to ear. Thank you my dear gentleman 🙂
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Such a beautiful and melodic voice to accompany your words. xxx
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Thank you very much Deanna. I appreciate your lovely compliments 🙂
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This was wonderful. You read beautifully, the poem is very touching, it brought tears to my eyes. I hope you plan on doing more.
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Aww! Thank you for such heartwarming comments. I really appreciate this. Yes I plan to do more. I am thinking of making it a feature on my blog. My regards 🙂
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I am not sure if I have responded to this comment but it caught my eye once again.
Thank you so much for taking the time to listen and comment. I am happy that you like it. I plan to do more henceforth 🙂
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Good I’m glad. You did a beautiful job.
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Congratulations on your first one!
And to think it was impromptu … you are good Lady! No tomatoes from me, only flowers. 😉
Well done!
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Thank you Flo. I shall have to look at your professional videos soon and see how you flow 🙂
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Great job! I’m glad you just went for it!!!
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Thank you Jason. Your encouragement really helped as well 🙂
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You are brave and beautiful and have a lyrical voice and a magical way with words. And Bravo on your first vlog. Did I mention brave? Yes. Amazing job!!!
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Thank you so much Becky for your kind and supportive words. I totally appreciate them. My regards. Jacqueline
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Thanks my dear friend 🙂
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I love that you did this! Why would you think anyone would throw stuff at you? You read so well and it’s fantastic that you did it on the spot, spontaneous. Great idea and really wonderful to see you in video and hear your voice. Enjoyed the next one too and look forward to seeing and hearing more of poetry vlogs 🙂 super well done 🙂
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Such lovely and encouraging words. Thank you Colette. I appreciate them and there will definitely be more going forward 🙂
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