LIVING FREE…
May I live
Unafraid to breathe
Free from a choke-hold
That becomes a stronghold
May I live
Unafraid to live
Clinging to my expectations
With feral desperation
SHARING FREELY…
May I share space
Unafraid of being encased
Free from condemnation of race
That becomes a strong base
Purple, White, Olive, Black and every hue within
May I share space
Knowing that we are first a human race
…And all blood are red in this place.
BELIEVE FREELY…
May I speak of belief
Unafraid and in relief
Free from contentious eyes of disbelief
That becomes thresholds of grief
May I wear my mask of belief
Understanding that to achieve
Peace would be a welcome reprieve
…Which we must seek to retrieve.
LOVING FREELY…
May I love you
Unafraid to be bound to you
Free from censors of broken whispers
That becomes harbingers of cold shivers
May I love freely my love
Unafraid to expose my naked bust
Knowing that in you lies my trust
Encased in the warm embrace of your love.
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
Writing 101, Day 5 Freedom
you wrote so well…
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Thank you my dear Parul. I appreciate 🙂
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😍
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“Free from censors of broken whispers
That becomes harbingers of cold shivers”
I love those lines… universal feelings and thoughts for so many in so many ways… just perfect.
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Love is a universal language that exists in every living thing. Thank you Astrid for your lovely comments 🙂
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super wow, that is all i can say, just wow……….a lot to think about
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Sarah my dear neighbour and friend, thank you 🙂
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I feel like I wrote a very simplified version of this without even knowing it. I love the way you elaborated, truly expressing the want of freedom.
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I love your Clarissa. Succinctly said and full of meaning.
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Indeed, “all blood are red”! All are equal! Well penned, Jacqueline 🙂
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Thankfully, we are all the same under the colour of skin 🙂
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How did you know I don’t have green blood? I may be alien in disgust oh… LOL 😀
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Now that’s a good cheeky rhyme 😉
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The flow is fantastic. Would you mind if I shared this with my son so he can put a beat to it. (He is in the music industry) This is a fantastic rap! When it’s done I can email you the finished product to listen to. He would not sell it or use it without your permission though so don’t worry about that possibility.
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Thank you very much. Its a compliment to want to do so and that’s fine with me. I would be delighted to hear what he comes up with eventually 🙂
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Wonderful. I will show it to him 🙂
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Good 🙂
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🙂
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Wow! What a great poem. It is so well spoken and strong. 🙂
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My appreciations Susan. Warm regards 🙂
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Awww. Another masterpiece, Jacq! 😀
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Awww. You do me great things with your awesome compliment. Thank you my dear friend 🙂
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Well you deserve it. Your writing skills are getting better and better!
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I believe so too, thanks to WordPress. Blessings my dear 🙂
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😀
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This is lovely Jacqui, so eloquently written. 🙂
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Thank you my lady 🙂
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Written from a soul that leaves us all breathless!
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Thank you very much my fair lady 🙂
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Beautiful ,rhythmic, I live your take on this theme,very articulate. 🙂
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Thank you my dear. You must still be basking in the birthday warmth 🙂
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Yes o my sis, I am gearing up for a live performance my team tonight on the island with friends #TGIF 🙂
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That’s lovely 🙂 Have fun
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Thanks 🙂
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Absolutely fabulous… re blogging this right away! Its something i want others to see. Well done sis…
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Thank you my dear one. I do appreciate 🙂
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Reblogged this on femininematerz and commented:
Inspiring and beautiful thoughts on Freedom to love and more …by Jacqueline Cookingpotandtwistedtales.com
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this is absolutely beautiful! I printed it out and plan to frame it. I found the PRINT button, but not the RE-BLOG button. I would love to re-blog this on my site. 🙂
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Thank you very much Gradmama. I feel very pleased. I am a bit surprised that the RE-BLOG button is missing, ‘cos it was there earlier and another friend wanted to re-blog which she did. I am sure it’s a WordPress issue ‘cos I haven’t tinkered with my settings at all. Let’s hope it comes right back and Yes you may Re-blog my lady. My warm regards.
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I just don’t know how you do it…perfectly articulated!
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Thanks my dear Tasha..sincerely speaking, I have no idea how too. I just write what’s in my heart at that point in time.
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