The loud bang of the gun shot startled and sent Habiba racing in the direction of the sound, her Ferragamo slippers clattered as she rushed along.
In disbelief, her bulging eyes stared at Hamid’s body scattered at an odd angle. His gold plated hand gun on the floor beside his slackened hand.
Dead! Hamid died from a single well aimed shot to the temple; blowing parts of his crown to pieces.
In horror she screamed endlessly. The catastrophe before her eyes horrified her senses.
The ruckus alerted the maid’s and the children; who all came rushing to the scene.
Why? Why? Habiba sobbed and mumbled incoherently in Arabic.
She had noticed his withdrawn and restless attitude for days on end but his heated discussions over the telephone had not appeared any different from other days when he was brokering a deal.
She had paid no mind to it at all. Her days were consumed with the usual shopping sprees, yacht meet ups with friends, an occasional private party trip to the casinos in Monaco and the high-life of a pampered wife of a stupendously wealthy industrial giant.
“No! Y’Allah!” she yelled at the Philippina nanny’s. ”Take them away from here.”
She didn’t want them to see the mind numbing horrifying sight. It would scar their psyche for the rest of their lives.
The note simply said: “I am sorry. It’s all gone. I lost it all.”
She frantically called her brother Majid on her gem-studded Vertu phone; he would know what to do.
Nothing made any sense to her befuddled mind.
© Jacqueline Oby-Ikocha
This story is total fiction conjured from an article in The National: online United Arab Emirates news about a major jewellery line owner who has been jailed for fraud.
The Daily Post prompt Ripped from the headlines.
Head to your favorite online news source. Pick an article with a headline that grabs you. Now, write a short story based on the article.
Wow very nice!!
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Thank you Mama 🙂
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Welcome dear! 🙂
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Great story if a little bleak.
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Thank you Eric 🙂
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The despair of life lived for earthly treasure. Good job on pulling that from the headlines. Someday, you’ll be writing your own television crime series.:0)
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Amen to that prayer Pam. From your mouth to God’s ears. Thank you my dear one 🙂
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you could be a thriller writer.
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change that. you are a thriller writer.
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((hugs)) dear Violet 🙂
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Hmm! An idea to think about.
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I like using prompts like that and you’ve used it very well!
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Thank you sis. They keep stretching us which is a good thing 🙂
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Great story Jacqueline! It kept me on the edge through to the end! 🙂
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I am glad you enjoyed it Kat. Thank yo very much 🙂
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Thanks for saying it so starkly, that “stuff” does not create peace and contentment. Yes.
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Not at all!
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What an interesting writing prompt!
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Thank you dear Maria. They just like to stretch our skills this WordPress prompters 😉
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Great thriller! You ought to turn this into a short story. 👍🏽
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Thanks my dear. I’ll see how it goes 🙂
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The gold-plated gun…nice touch…a little foreshadowing of what was going on! Sadly, this sort of thing happens all the time, I’d love to a read a story about what becomes of her.
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Thank you Belinda for reading and commenting. I will sniff around and see what happened 😉
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You successfully convinced me they are filthy rich down to the last detail. Her reaction is so engaging.
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Thank you Noififre. Truly, there are extremely wealthy people living here.
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From what I see on the reports and the video especially the hotel, yep they are blessed.
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They are. My question is how is it impacting the have-nots around them?
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Sadly whilst the rich flourish, the have-nots gets poorer, it is a sick cycle of economics.
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Man! What a mess she stepped into!
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As a matter of fact! Such a woman’s life would change 360 degrees.
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